Tiglath
2021-10-11 21:27:20 UTC
Has anyone visited the Society of Ancients (SOA) site?
It's not a public forum, but a forum nevertheless, and it stands alone like one of those houses you see, spared by a hurricane or volcanic eruption, intact yet surrounded by destruction.
It's a real hit of fresh air... People being nice to one another, criticism couched in bales of cotton wool, and yet rare is the thread or post that doesn't have interesting, if not thoroughly engaging, prose, if you like history.
Complaints about the decline of writing standards in the young seem obligatory for every generation to make about the next. The people of Sumer complained about it in clay tablets and the whining has never stopped since.
No point being stern and censorious then about the way posters write here, except for the undesirable effects the medium itself has on good prose.
It's not syntax or punctuation, or the mush we see from the careless, it's the slow erosion of the qualities of classical prose and the difficulty avoiding bad habits. Exhibit 1.
Why the hedging? The constant hedging.
"Apparently," "in part," "to some extent," "almost," "nearly" .... you know...
And, "I would argue." That's a good one. I must mean that you'd argue something if you had a better argument, but for now what follows is all you can manage - a pathetic premise.
~99% of posts are hedging posts, including mine.
All made necessary because, before long in places like this, posters discover that one has to write not classic prose where the reader and writer are viewed as equals, and the writer is just directing the reader's gaze towards some truth, she hadn't noticed before, but that now she can see and understand for herself. No, that is not possible. Posters need to write as if posts were legal documents. A statement in a legal document WILL be interpreted adversarially, without the assumption of cooperation that governs a normal conversation; so every exception must be spelled out.
Hedging is sometimes justified, but it's a choice not a tic. And a tic is what posters soon develop here. It is a bad habit, because a classic writer counts on the common sense and the ordinary charity of his readers, just as in everyday conversation we know when a speaker means 'in general,' or 'all other things being equal,' without saying it.
This allows a normal writer to phrase subordinate points precisely, but without the promise that they are technically accurate. The convention between writer and reader is that the writer is not to be challenged in those points, because they are mere scaffolding.
We keep learning and forgetting that any adversary who is unscrupulous enough to give the least uncharitable reading to an unhedged statement, will find an opening to attack the writer in a thicket full of hedged ones anyway.
Examples abound, no names necessary.
No wonder that after more than twenty years in SHM, I can only think kindly of a handful of people. It's not really the people, if you discount geocentrists, it's the medium. It brings out the worse in us. We knew it all along, but it took Facebook to amplify the phenomenon enough to make it plain to see.
A good explanation for 'the good old times' is usually a faulty memory, but I still think there were a few good times here too, let's not forget.
"To some extent."
It's not a public forum, but a forum nevertheless, and it stands alone like one of those houses you see, spared by a hurricane or volcanic eruption, intact yet surrounded by destruction.
It's a real hit of fresh air... People being nice to one another, criticism couched in bales of cotton wool, and yet rare is the thread or post that doesn't have interesting, if not thoroughly engaging, prose, if you like history.
Complaints about the decline of writing standards in the young seem obligatory for every generation to make about the next. The people of Sumer complained about it in clay tablets and the whining has never stopped since.
No point being stern and censorious then about the way posters write here, except for the undesirable effects the medium itself has on good prose.
It's not syntax or punctuation, or the mush we see from the careless, it's the slow erosion of the qualities of classical prose and the difficulty avoiding bad habits. Exhibit 1.
Why the hedging? The constant hedging.
"Apparently," "in part," "to some extent," "almost," "nearly" .... you know...
And, "I would argue." That's a good one. I must mean that you'd argue something if you had a better argument, but for now what follows is all you can manage - a pathetic premise.
~99% of posts are hedging posts, including mine.
All made necessary because, before long in places like this, posters discover that one has to write not classic prose where the reader and writer are viewed as equals, and the writer is just directing the reader's gaze towards some truth, she hadn't noticed before, but that now she can see and understand for herself. No, that is not possible. Posters need to write as if posts were legal documents. A statement in a legal document WILL be interpreted adversarially, without the assumption of cooperation that governs a normal conversation; so every exception must be spelled out.
Hedging is sometimes justified, but it's a choice not a tic. And a tic is what posters soon develop here. It is a bad habit, because a classic writer counts on the common sense and the ordinary charity of his readers, just as in everyday conversation we know when a speaker means 'in general,' or 'all other things being equal,' without saying it.
This allows a normal writer to phrase subordinate points precisely, but without the promise that they are technically accurate. The convention between writer and reader is that the writer is not to be challenged in those points, because they are mere scaffolding.
We keep learning and forgetting that any adversary who is unscrupulous enough to give the least uncharitable reading to an unhedged statement, will find an opening to attack the writer in a thicket full of hedged ones anyway.
Examples abound, no names necessary.
No wonder that after more than twenty years in SHM, I can only think kindly of a handful of people. It's not really the people, if you discount geocentrists, it's the medium. It brings out the worse in us. We knew it all along, but it took Facebook to amplify the phenomenon enough to make it plain to see.
A good explanation for 'the good old times' is usually a faulty memory, but I still think there were a few good times here too, let's not forget.
"To some extent."